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I have similar comments in mind for the critique of this piece as this one:teamlpsandacnl.deviantart.com/…. Probably since they have a similar context.
It has great color combinations. The slivers of clothing seem to be a little shaking-ly drawn. You may be putting to much pressure on you pen or stylist, and I recommend relaxing a bit and try to do the line art in strokes. You may do this with the sketch, as many do, but most don't consider this with the line art. If the strokes seem to messy but seems like more relaxed way to do line art I suggest you just try and clean it up when your finished.
Other than that paragraph, it's the same with this one as the other critique I did for you. (The one linked above.)
Hope you found this helpful.
-Hannah.